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高考英语作文写作 一、英文作文写作四步骤 Step1:确定文体 常用文体有记叙文、说明文,还有应用文如书信等。近几年的高考书面表达多以应用文为主,提供的形式多以图画、提纲、表格出现,书写的格式大都是书信、通知。所以,考生还应该掌握信的称呼、开头、正文、结尾、签名等方面,另外,口头通知和书面通知的不同要清楚。总之,考生应根据写作提示分析材料,确定文体,闯过第一关。 Step2:确定时态和人称 要根据选好的文体和写作内容确定时态。一般来说,记人叙事多用一般过去时;发布通知多用一般将来时和祈使句式;发表议论大多用带有情态动词的一般现在时;人物介绍、现状说明常用一般现在时和现在完成时。定准时态后接下来一定要知道各时态的构成及用法要点,但要记住,写作时时态并不惟一,要依据表达内容而选定。 Step3:确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构 在以上“两确定”的基础上,应该根据文章体裁和内容逐个地确定写作要点。对于图画和图表可在草稿纸上用中文列出。理清要点,然后选词造句,对列出的要点逐一翻译。这时要注意力求语言准确得当。平时写作要多进行发散思维,如是用very sorry还是terribly sorry;是surprised还是aston-ished。同时考生应学会尽可能使用较高级的语法结构和词汇,如非谓语动词、复合句等。最大限度地完美文章。 Step4:整理成篇行文连贯 接下来要根据内容分清文章的层次,确定详略,将写好的单句要重新排列组合起来,使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词使文章过渡自然,行文流畅。另外,根据内容编排,该分段时要分段,使表达清楚,一目了然。行云流水,整齐划一,闯过写作第四关。( 二、连接词的分类和运用 连接词是指在文章中用来说明上下句或前后两个意思之间关系的词或词组。连接词通常用于开篇,引出扩展句;也可用于句中,尤其是用于较长的复合句中,以作为上下文的连接纽带;还可以置于文末或段末,用于总结上文或结束本段落的内容。 1、表示平行、对等或选择关系:and, bothand, as well as, as well, neithernor, or eitheror,not onlybut also等 ?He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province. (NMET 1991范文) ?I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. (NMET 2001范文) 2.表示转折关系的连接词语有:but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand, in spite of, nevertheless, although, otherwise 等 ?On the other hand, 40% think that fee should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers. (NMET 2002范文) ?While they were working, my sister walked to a river nearby. (NMET范文) 3.表示因果关系的连接词:for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of等 ?He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. (NMET 1997范文) ?He didnt work hard, as a result, he failed in the exam. 4.表示时间顺序的连接词:at first, first, second, then, next, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, eventually, as soon as, the next moment,shortly after, for one thing, for another thing 等 ?After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. .(NMET1996范文) 1 ?The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.(NMET2000范文) 5.表示空间顺序的连接词:on the right, to the left, on one side of, on the other side of. At the foottopend of, in the middlecenter of,等 ?On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now, stands another new buildingour library.(NMET1999范文) ?In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. (NMET99范文) 6.表示解释说明的连接词:that is (to say), in other words, such as, for exampleinstance, namely, actually, to tell you the truth according to this ,and so on 等 ?I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums and taking computer lessons.(NMET2001范文) ?In other words , I love my hometown and the people there. 7.表递进关系的连接词:whats moreworsebetter, besides, in addition, worse still, to make things worse, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only but also ?become necessary to build Whats more , it will gates and walls (NMET2002范文) ?In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. Whats more ,I can go to bed earlier.(NMET2001范文) ?In addition to meeting the need of markets at home, its products are shipped to many countries. 8.表示总结的连接词:in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know ,on the whole, to sum up等 ?In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load.(NMET2001范文) ?In a word, great changes have taken place in our village. 连接词在文章中起着重要作用,千万不可忽视! 三:写作中怎样使用复杂结构和高级词汇 一)、怎样运用复杂结构: 1. 改变时态 The bell is ringing now. (一般) There goes the bell. (高级) 2. 改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级) 3. 使用不定式 He is so kind that he can help me. (一般) He is so kind as to help me. (高级) 4. 使用过去分词 She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般) Followed by many students, she . (高级) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般) Once seen, it can . (高级) 5. 使用v-ing形式 When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般) On his arriving/ arrival, please give. (高级) If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow. (一般) Weather permi tting, Ill come tomorrow. (高级) Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般) Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. (高级) 6. 使用名词性从句 It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up. (一般) The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody. (高级) I happened to have met him. (一般) It happened that I had met him. (高级) To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般) What surprised him is that the girl. (高级) 7. 使用状语从句 I wont believe what he says. (一般) No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高级) If you come back before six oclock, you can go out. (一般) You can go out on condition that you come back before. (高级) The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般) The meal was so nice that w e all. (高级) 8. 使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般) The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级) I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般) The su bjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English. (高级) 9. 使用虚拟语气 The ship didnt sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一般) But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk. (高级) I wasnt invited to the party, so I didnt attend it. (一般) If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. (高级) 10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句 Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般) It was not until 1920 that regular radio. (高级Though Im weak, I will make the effort. (一般) Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. (高级) We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般) How glad we were to see the crops and.! (高级) 11. 使用并列句 If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般) Go through the gate, and youll find. (高级) When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般) The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级) I got up late this morning. I didnt catch the early bus. (一般) I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (高级) 二)怎样运用高级词汇: ?As a result, the plan was a failure. (一般) The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级) ?She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般) She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. (高级) ?Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (一般) Thanks to the good weather, our journey. (高级) ?She doesnt like sports.She cares nothing for sports ?We had to go home. What we had to do was go home 四、写作常见错误分析: 1. 句子缺谓语 1) The building like a match box. 2) He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. 2.主谓不一致,尤其是单数第三人称作主语时,谓语的单复数形式出现错误。 1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field 2) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun. 3.时态错误 1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed 2) What are you doing this time yesterday? 4.词性混用 1) She enjoys study English. 2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know. 5.介词误用 1) In my surprise, he has got the first prize. 2) He came here to attend the meeting by a new car. 3) Dont read under the sun. 6.冠词误用 1) We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five. 2) Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion. 3) The history is actually a very interesting subject. 7.名词的数混淆 1) It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing. 2) There is always traffic jam. 8.动词用法错误 1) Where are you come from? 2) When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me. 3) He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.4) The accident was happened in 1999. 9.习惯用法错误 1) The actor in this movie is very beautiful. 2) I and My parents were working in the fields at that time. 3) The reason is because he does not know what to do next. 10. 句子之间的逻辑关系不清 误:It hit the old man down but the driv er, a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The old man and I saw the cars number. Its AC864. The old man couldnt move , I decided to help him. 正:It hit the old man down but the driv er, who was a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. Fortunately, I saw the cars number. Its AC864. Noticing the old man couldnt move, I decided to help him. 11.画蛇添足、过多的长句使句子复杂化(语言不简洁) 修改前: A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting. 修改后: A famous sportsman was giving an interesting speech. 修改前 Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. The air pollution is becoming more and more serious which is caused by buses and cars. Whats more, so many rivers are polluted by dirty water which is from factory. In addition, sandstorm struck us now and then, from which we suffered a lot. 修改后 Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. As a result, people have to suffer sandstorms now and then. Whats more, as buses and cars give off a lot of poisonous gases, the air is getting dirtier and dirtier. Moreover, there are many rivers polluted by dirty water from factories. The situation is becoming more and more serious. 修改前: As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. There were some students playing piano violin and so on . 修改后: As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on. 12.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性,可读性。 修改前 Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. 修改后 Yesterday, a policeman stopped a carHonda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk. 修改前 Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didnt stop and hit the old man. The driver didnt stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman.修改后 Suddenly, a car turned west from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit the old man, but it didnt stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and the driver was a woman. 五、英文作文必背之25个句型 1.the + est +名词+ (that) +主词+ have +ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) the most +形容词+名词+ (that) +主词+ have +ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 2.Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 3. cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。) We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 4.There is no denying that + S + V .(不可否认的.) There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 5.It is universally acknowledged that +句子 (全世界都知道.) It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 6.There is no doubt that +句子 (毫无疑问的.) There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 7.An advantage of is that +句子(.的优点是.) An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 8.The reason why +句子 is that +句子(.的原因是.) The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 9.So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此.以致于.) So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。 二特殊角的三角函数值(2)如圆中有直径的条件,可作出直径上的圆周角.（直径添线成直角）10.Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然.) 64.24.8生活中的数3 P30-35Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不 30 o45 o60 o11.The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V 弓形：弦及所对的弧组成的图形叫做弓形。The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more+ Adj + S + V (愈.愈.) The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。 12.By +Ving, can (借着.,.能够.) By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 13.It is time + S +过去式(该是.的时候了) 定理：在同圆或等圆中,相等的圆心角所对的弧相等、所对的弦相等、所对的弦心距相等。（3）圆内接四边形：若四边形的四个顶点都在同一个圆上,这个四边形叫做圆内接四边形.It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps tosolve the traffic problems. 圆心；垂直于弦；平分弦；平分弦所对的优弧；平分弦所对的劣弧。该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 sin继续阅读