【创新方案】2014届高考英语一轮复习第一部分写作序列升级第二讲第六课时如何写好定语课件新人教版.ppt
第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,第六课时 如何写好定语 一、前置定语与后置定语 英语中定语的位置与汉语中定语的位置有很大不同，这往往导致学生写出汉语式英语句子，成为失分的主要因素之一。 1前置定语 名词、数词、代词、形容词、单个的分词作定语，一般用在主语或宾语前。 China is a developing country. 中国是发展中国家。,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,2后置定语 短语、句子作定语时一般放于中心词的后面；另外，形容词修饰不定代词、副词作定语时也常常放于中心词的后面。 What's the language spoken in that area? 那个地区讲什么语言？ The men here are always busy working on the farm. 这里的男人总是忙于在田间干活。,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,点睛 在使用定语时，常出现双谓语错误。 Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.(双谓语错误) Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. Professor Li who is/comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 二、从句作定语定语从句 运用定语从句必须注意两点：由关系代词或关系副词所替代的成分在从句中不能重复出现；定语从句与简单句一样，也要求句子结构既正确又完整。,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,1定语从句的结构,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,As we have known, he is a good student. 众所周知，他是个好学生。,I advised them to take Bus No. 20, which could take them there directly. 我建议他们乘坐20路公交车，它能直接把他们带到那里。 (2012·北京书面表达),第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,The netizens who don't voice their opinions account for ten percent. 没有发表观点的网民(netizen)占百分之十。,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,2定语从句使用时的常见错误 (1)能否正确使用关系代词或关系副词是写好定语从句的关键。用 关系代词还是关系副词，完全取决于其在从句中作什么成分。 This is the mountain village where I visited last year. ( ) This is the mountain village which I visited last year. ( ) (2)无论是关系代词还是关系副词，都在定语从句中充当成分， 都有替代作用，而被替代部分需去掉。 Is this the bike (that) you bought it yesterday？ ( ) Is this the bike (that) you bought yesterday？ ( ),×,×,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,(3)非限制性定语从句是对先行词的一种解释或说明，在写 作中往往和限制性定语从句混用。 Beijing is a lively city with a long history where you can see ancient and modern cultures. ( ) Beijing is a lively city with a long history, where you can see ancient and modern cultures. ( ),×,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,句式升级 恰当地使用定语从句可以提升作文的档次。 Without water, man can't live, so it is of great importance. Water, without which man can't live, is of great importance. (句子“瘦身”。使用定语从句后句子更简练) He made brilliant remarks on the famous film. The remarks that he made on the famous film was brilliant. He thought of an important way to deal with it. The way he thought of to deal with it was of great importance. (“高级”变中来；使用定语从句突出了brilliant和importance),第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,练一练 把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句 I've always longed for the days. I will be able to be independent then. _ _ I have a friend. Her father is an engineer. _ They planted the trees. The trees didn't need much water. _,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,They will fly to Beijing. They plan to stay in Beijing for two or three days. _ _ They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them. The elderly always feel lonely. _ _,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,I've always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent. I have a friend whose father is an engineer. They planted the trees that/which didn't need much water. They will fly to Beijing, where they plan to stay for two or three days. They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.,答案：,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,.基础巩固 1根据汉语意思完成句子 (1)穿蓝衣服的那个男孩喜欢桌子上的那本书。 The boy likes the book . (2)五分之一的工人已经在这里工作了八年。 workers have worked here for eight years. (3)在这个博物馆里我们能看到许多你发现的恐龙化石。 We can see many dinosaur fossils in this museum.,in blue,on the desk,One fifth of the,discovered by you,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,(4)来中国的最好时间是春天或秋天。 The best time is spring or autumn. (5)那个大声用英语唱歌的女孩是露西。 The girl is Lucy. (6)我们的班长正与一位女作家交谈。 Our monitor is talking to .,to come to China,singing in English aloud,a woman writer,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,2用定语从句翻译下列句子 (1)我看到过你在网上张贴的夏令营通知，我对此很感兴趣。 (2012·新课标全国卷书面表达) _ _ (2)正如我们所知，书籍是知识的源泉。(2012·湖北短文写作) _,I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.,As we know, books are the source of knowledge.,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,(3)你们已经取得了很大的进步，这使老师非常高兴。 _ _ (4)鲁迅的原名(real name)是周树人。他一生中写了很多小说。 _ _ (5)北京是中国的首都，它是一座美丽的城市。 _,You have made great progress, which makes our teacher very happy.,Lu Xun, whose real name is Zhou Shuren, wrote many novels in his whole life.,Beijing, which is the capital of China, is a beautiful city.,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,(6)杰克来自加拿大，他在我们学校已经学习了三年。他不仅 经常帮助我们学英语，而且中文也讲的很不错。 _,Jack comes from Canada. He is a student of our school where he has studied for three years. Not only does he often help us learn English but he speaks Chinese fluently as well.,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,.能力提升 1按要求翻译句子 (1)你们是一支全球闻名的乐队。(形容词、介词短语作定语) _ (2)我写这份电子邮件想向您征求一些如何成立乐队的建议。 (介词短语作定语) _ _,You are a wellknown music band all over the world.,I am writing this Email to ask you for some advice on how to form a band.,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,(3)我们对流行音乐和现代舞蹈感兴趣。(形容词作定语) _ (4)我们怎样才能得到更多的表演机会？(不定式作定语) _ (5)如果您能够为我们的乐队想出一个名字，我们将不胜感激。 (介词短语作定语) _ _,We are all interested in pop music and modern dance.,How can we get more chances to perform?,We'd appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.,第二讲 第六课时 如何写好定语,2选用以上句子给凤凰传奇(Phoenix Legend)发一封电子邮件以寻求帮助 参考范文： _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,Dear Phoenix Legend， I am Li Hua. Since you are a wellknown music band all over the world, I am writing this Email to ask you for some advice on how to form a band. We are all interested in pop music and modern dance. And is it enough to practice only at weekends? What's more, how can we get more chances to perform? We'd appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours sincerely， Li Hua,
