LiveinHarmony英语高考作文.ppt
高三学生在家庭成员及班级同学的关系处理总体上是好的。但也存在着一些不和谐因素。就目前实际情况：好与坏两方面。根据你个人的意见，写一篇英语短文 注意： （1）除诗歌外，文体不限； （ 2）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； （3）词数为120左右。,Live in Harmony,Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the realationship between us students and our family members, classmates as well teachers is good. However, there exist some problems. Some students in our grade are easy to lose their temper because of unbearable anxiety and heavy study burden. Whats worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.,In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation. First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Second, when we are not feeling good, we can chat with our friends, teachers and parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Third, after a days hard work, we can relax ourselves by taking some exercise, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on. The most important is to create a harmonious atmosphere around us in order to realize self-harmony,请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。 Never be afraid of making mistakes. Factually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistake s reveal where success lies. 注意：（1）无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； （2）除诗歌外，文体不限； （3）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； （4）词数为120左右。,Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference. I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could have avoided them. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I built up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.,评分原则： 一、评分原则 本题总分为 30 分，按5 个档次给分。 词数少于 100，将分数降低一个档次。 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前题下侧重于语言的表达。 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。 拼写与标点符号是语言表达准确的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 如书写太潦草，以至影响辨认，将分数降低一个档次。,二、各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档 2530 分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 所有内容与提示吻合。 应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构与词汇应用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达；具备较强的语言运用能力。 恰当使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。,第四档 1924 分 完成了试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示吻合。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 语法结构与词汇应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达有一定影响。 较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的,第二档 712 分 仅完成试题规定的部分任务。 主要内容与提示基本吻合。 语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者,第一档 16 分 未完成试题规定的任务。 主要内容与提示不太吻合。 语法结构单一，应用词汇十分有限。 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。 0 分 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。,
