温明秀——七下英语Unit12写作课件.ppt

English Writing,By Wen Mingxiu,What did you do last weekend?,Unit 12,I 书面表达的主要形式,A 记叙文（尤其是故事性的） 注意五个W一个H.即: When , Who ,What ,Where , Why, How B其它应用文 包括：书信、日记、通知、便条(请假条、电话留言、留言条)及贺卡等 。 C几种文体的结合 这是很值得我们关注的一个趋向。如在信中进行说明，是一封信，但又是一篇以空间为顺序的说明文。,II平时训练中的几个注意点,1 、 准备工作 仔细审题，明确要求。 罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要点。,紧扣要点，寻求思路。 草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好结尾 （可适当发表自己的观点）。,2 写作之中,.开门见山，紧扣主题 。,.语言正确, 规范地道。,参观农场的日记： 关于度假：,句型、结构，避免中国式英语。 I spent 10 yuan buy the book. He by bike to school. 标点符号,Last Sunday we visited a farm.,We had a happy holiday last weekend.,.重短轻长, 就易避难。,.过渡自然, 表达流畅。,以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。,正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。 不重复使用可置换的词。,.适当评论, 发表己见。,What a busy weekend ! He is a good boy .,3.成文之后,. 一般语法项目的检查,人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 时态: They are going to the island yesterday. 主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English.,. 注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句),1. I with my friends played soccer. I played soccer with my friends. 2.The weaher is how nice! How nice the weather is! 3. He didnt know where was the bookshop . He didnt know where the bookshop was.,. 符合习惯 My work is very busy.,I very much like it.,Im very busy with my work.,I like it very much.,. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。,小结,审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写,III书面表达：Write about what you did last weekend.,B did my homework,C played soccer,A cleaned my room,D watched TV,E visited my aunt,F went to the movies,范文： I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I _1_. In the afternoon, I _2_ , It was a little difficult. On Saturday night,I _3_My aunt cooked dinner for me. On Sunday morning, I _4_. I watched a good movie Named “kungfu”.Then in the afternoon, I _5_with my friends. On Sunday night, I_6_.I saw an interesting talk show.,范文： I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I A cleaned my room . In the afternoon, I B did my homework. It was a little difficult. On Saturday night, I E visited my aunt .My aunt cooked dinner for me. On Sunday morning, I F went to the movies . I watched a good movie named “kungfu”. Then in the afternoon, I C played Soccer with my friends. On Sunday night, I D watched TV I saw an interesting talk show.,IV 书面表达(15分） 根据图表内容写一篇英语短文，介绍你的朋友David 。短文题目已给出。 要求 不得逐字翻译，允许适当发挥； 可用不同方式表达图表内容 词数：60词左右。,范文： My good friendDavid David is my good friend. He's an English boy. He was born in London on June 18,1993.He likes playing football, working on a computer and listening to music. David came to Beijing, China with his parents three years ago. Now he's studying at No. 1 Middle School in Beijing. He's good at his lessons, and he's on the school football team.,yesterday once more when I was young I'd listen to the radio waiting for my favorite songs when they played I'd sing along, it made me smile. Those were such happy times and not so long ago how I wondered where they'd gone. but they're back again just like a long lost friend all the songs I love so well. I:Yesterday_Once_More.rm,VI Homework:,就植树节这一天的植树活动写一篇简短的日记 (单词数：50左右)。 提示：1穿旧衣服； 2早餐后乘车到西山； 3挖坑、种树、浇水;每人种树3棵； 412点结束; 5感想；6.天气晴朗。 (Tree Planting Day，the West Hill ,by bus ,in old clothes.plant three young trees ) Monday Mar12th，2009 Fine,Thank you for listening!,