2019【创新方案】2014届高考英语一轮复习第一部分分类写作第一讲书信电子邮件课件新人教版.ppt

书信/电子邮件是最受高考青睐的一种考查方式；考点一般涉及信件正文及开篇语、结束语。,1写作攻略 (1)细读提示，认真审题 审体裁，其体裁有：建议信、投诉信、道歉信、申请信、求职信等；定人称；定时态。 (2)紧扣主题，组织要点 这类写作题中的“要点”似乎已经定好了，但同学们仍需逐个把内容要点完整地列出来。 (3)选词造句，初步成文,2高分制造技巧 第一段点明题旨。除常规的问候之外，不妨直接用与“I am writing to tell you .”类似的句子开头，直截了当，言简意赅。 第二段详细介绍题中所提示的具体内容。为了提高文章的连贯性和条理性，同学们应注意运用一些表示逻辑顺序的词汇，如first, second, what's more, finally等将内容巧妙地连贯起来，从而形成有机的整体。 最后一段应该客气地询问对方的意见，同时表达真诚的祝福和热情的问候，体现中学生文明礼貌素养。,假设你叫李华，昨天你收到了两周前在某网站订购的一款iPod touch播放器。但是你发现收到的商品存在以下问题： 1订购的播放器内存是64GB，而收到播放器的内存是32GB； 2订购的是一款蓝色播放器，而收到的是一款黑色播放器； 3播放器的包装盒已损坏。 请你根据以上内容，写一封100字左右的投诉信给美国苹果公司，要求对方道歉并补偿 (compensation)。,第一讲 书信/电子邮件,一、“三准”确保作文上及格线,典例为投诉信，体现其特点的常用句型有：,I am writing to complain about .,I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with .,第一步,目标,定体裁,审题准审题确定方向，行文紧扣主题,我写此信以表达我对的不满,开始语：我写信是想抱怨,我希望你能认真对待此事并努力防止此类事件的再次发生。,I demand that you should .,I hope you can give me a satisfying reply and deal with this matter reasonably.,I hope that you will take this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.,结束语：,我希望你能给我一个满意的答复并合理处理此事。,我要求你应该,要点一：写信投诉糟糕的服务。 关键词： 时态：_ 要点二：两周前在某网站订购的一款iPod touch播放器。 关键词： 时态：_,write to complain,进行时,place an order/order,过去时,要点三：蓝色；内存64GB 关键词： 时态：_ 要点四：昨天收到包裹。 关键词： 时态：_ 要点五：发现收到的商品出现问题。 关键词：_ 时态：_ 要点六：内存是32GB; 黑色 关键词： 时态： _,blue,一般现在时,receive,过去时,find; go wrong,过去时；过去完成时,black,一般现在时,要点七：在收到之前包装盒已损坏。 关键词： 时态语态：_ _ 要点八：要求对方道歉并补偿。 关键词： 时态：_,reach; damage,过去时；过去完成时的被动语态,demand; apologize,一般现在时,要点一：_ 要点二： _ _ 要点三： _,I am writing to complain about your poor service.,Two weeks ago, I placed an order on the Internet for an iPod touch music player.,Its color is blue and its RAM is 64GB.,要点五： _ 要点六：_ 要点七：_ _ 要点八：_ _,I found something had gone wrong.,It is a black one with 32GB RAM.,The packing case had been damaged before it reac- hed me.,I demand that you should apologize to me for your mistake and give me some compensation as soon as possible.,二、“四美”走出平庸创高分,升级句式一：用省略句改写要点三 _ 升级句式二：用whose引导的非限制性定语从句连接要点二和升级句式一 _ _,Its color is blue and RAM 64GB.,Two weeks ago, I placed an order on the Internet for an iPod touch music player，whose color is blue and RAM 64GB.,第四步,目标,词汇、句式升级,语言美追求高级表达，张扬个性风采,升级句式三：用when引导的时间状语从句连接要点四和五 _ _,When I received the package from your company yesterday, I found something had gone wrong.,升级句式二和句式三之间是转折关系，可使用转折连词 或副词 ；要点六、七罗列文中提到的问题；要点六前可使用序数词 提出第一个问题；然后使用 _ _等论述第二个问题，即要点七。,however,but,first,besides/in addition/ addi-tio nally/what's more,第五步,目标,巧用过渡词,衔接美巧妙衔接过渡，读文如沐春风,第一段：点明身份；说明意图(要点一) 第二段：详细阐述事件经过(要点二至七) 第三段：要求及应采取的措施(要点八),第一讲 书信/电子邮件,Dear Sir/Madam, _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua,I am Li Hua, a consumer from China. I am writing to complain about your poor service. Two weeks ago, I placedan order on the Internetfor an iPodtouch music player，whose color is blue and RAM 64GB. However, when I received the package from your company yesterday, I found somethi- ng had gone wrong. First, the player I got was not what I hadordered. It is a lack one with 32GB RAM. Besides, the packing case had been damaged before it reached me. I demand that you should apologize to me for your mistake and give me some compensation as soon as possible.,现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。 写作要点：1.简述过度使用耳机的现象； 2分析过度使用耳机的危害； 3提出你的建议。 注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,Dear Li Ping， _ _ _ _,I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones. As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I'm afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing. There are many ways,_ _ Yours， Lin Tao,we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon. Best wishes.,