写作指导顺序.ppt

Writing,写作,Writing,Basic Writing,Task Writing,Basic Writing,基础写作,基础写作的考查方向：,基础写作是 广东省高考新题型设置的重要组 成部分，主要考查同学们对英语基本句型的 运用,整合知识的能力和语言结构安排及基本 表述的能力此题基本不要求考生对写作内 容进行发挥，只需将所给信息完整准确连贯 地写出就可以了其实际上就是翻译和连词 成句，扩句成文的形式,基础写作的评分标准？ 1 2 3 4,句子内容的完整性(Completeness),句子结构的正确性(correctness),句子结构的连贯性(Coherence),句子内容的多样性(Variety),作文示范,请根据以下的情景说明，使用 5个规 范的英语 句子描述所给的全部信息内容： Lucy家附近有超市； 她喜欢逛超市； 超市里商品物美价廉； 超市购物方便； 她对超市今后的希望。,There have a supermarket near Lucys home. She is very like go shopping in there. Because the things are cheap and nice. It is convenience that go shopping in it. Lucy hopes the supermarket can be more and more better.(40词左右）,Shopping in the supermarket There is a big supermarket near Lucys home. She likes to go shopping with her mother there. On one hand, the goods in the supermarket are excellent in quality and reasonable in price. On the other hand, it is convenient for customers to go shopping there. As a result, Lucy hopes that there will be more supermarkets in the city and the things in the supermarket will be better and better.（80词左右）,基础写作:写作步骤,）确定标题（如果题中要求写标题就确定标题，若题中没做要求则可以不写）,）写出要点（如：文中涉及到的重点词汇，短语及句型）,）仔细审读写作要求和写作内容信息,）列提纲（列提纲的过程实际上是一个谋篇布局，把内容要点按恰当合理的顺序排列，使文章条理，通顺的过程,）写草稿并对其修改润色,6）眷写并复查（复查的项目包括：格式是否正确，内容是否完整， 表达是否准确，行文是否连贯等）,扩句成文时需要注意的：,整文要把内容归类整合，把单一的内容扩展丰富，把复杂的内容简单化。注意文章内容的完整性。 句子要用正确的句型表达出来，长短有致，通过分句和合句，增强句子连贯性和表现力。 学会使用关联词，使句与句之间更连贯更通顺。,关联词的使用：,1.递进： furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition 2.转折： however, but 3.总结：in a word, all in all, in short, to sum up, in conclusion 4.强调： in fact, especially, what is more,5.让步：although, though, even though/if 6. 并列：and , also, as well, eitheror, bothand 7.顺序：first, second, third on one hand, on the other hand firstly,then,besides, finally 8. 结果： as a result, therefore, so , thus,Exercises: 一、Combine the following sentences , using the link words.,His mother is sick. The children are sick. -His mother is sick, the children are sick as well. - his mother is sick, the children are sick. Jane is careful. Her sister is careless. -Jane is careful / her sister is careless.,Not only,but also,but,while,3. It was raining outside. We just stayed at home. -It was raining outside, _ / _ , we just stayed at home. -It was raining outside, _ _ _，we just stayed at home. 4. Our teacher is strict with us. We all respect him. -_ our teacher is strict with us, we all respect him. -Our teacher is strict with us, _ we all respect him.,so,therefore,as a result,Although,but,Practice: 请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。,假如你叫李华，你的朋友周亮最近开始吸烟，请你给他写封信，劝他不要吸烟了。因为： 1.学校禁止吸烟， 学生吸烟违反学校的规定。 2.吸烟有害健康，会导致癌症的发生。 3.吸烟浪费金钱。 4.如果不注意的话，吸烟会引起火灾。 写作要求： 1.必须使用5个规范的句子介绍全部的内容。 2.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。 3.观点要明确，论据要充分，可以根据需要扩展内容。,Key words:,break the rules 违反规定 be bad for/ do harm for 对有坏处 lead to 导致（不好的结果） waste 浪费 pay attention to 注意,Dear ZhouLiang, I heard that you are smoking these days, as a friend, I want to tell you my opinions about smoking. First, as we know, smoking is bad for our health, which can lead to the cancer. Second, smoking is a waste of money. Whats more, if you pay no attention to it , it will cause a big fire. In our school, it is not allowed for students to smoke, because it will break the rules of the school. Yours, LiHua,近三年广东高考英语基础写作对比分析：,第1课时 人物介绍,题目：Great Swimmer Michael Phelps,1. 米高.·菲尔普斯是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员。1985年6月30日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。 2. 他7岁开始游泳,经历了许多艰苦的训练。15岁的时候，他参加了2000年奥运会，并在200米蝶泳比赛中排名第五。据报道，他是这次次奥运会中自1932年以来竞争的最年轻的男性选手。 3在北京奥林匹克运动会， ·菲尔普斯实现了他的8枚金牌梦，打破了7个世界纪录，创造了历史。 4. 你的启示。(可以用谚语),写作要求：只能用5个句子（不包括给的部分）表达全部的内容。 参考词汇：迈克尔.菲尔普斯Michael Phelps；马利兰州巴尔的摩市 Baltimore, Maryland ；非凡的extraordinary蝶泳butterfly。,Great swimmer-Michael Phelps,Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer who was born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30, 1985. When he was seven years old，he started swimming and experienced much tough professional training. At the age of 15, he attended the 2000 Olympics and placed fifth in the 200-meter butterfly as the youngest male athlete o compete in the Olympics since 1932.,Furthermore, at the Beijing Olympic Games, Phelps realized his 8- gold medal dream and bravely broke 7 world records, creating the history. Its no wonder that Phelps has become such an athlete of great achievements because where theres a will, theres a way, as the old saying says.,