中考作文讲座.ppt

怎样准备英语中考 写作篇,优秀水平标准,1、能准确运用词汇和句型结构，较生动和详细地描述情境或叙述所给话题，能准确自如地表达态度和感情。 2、能用流畅的语言组织常见体裁的短文，逻辑清楚，结构完整，层次清晰，内容充实，文体恰当。 3、能在写作中恰当地引用资料，能用谚语、俗语等，能清楚地阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点，具有一定的人文意识。,写作分值逐年提高 05年10分 06年14分 07、08年16分 09、10、11年18分 12年20分,内容（8分） 是否紧扣主题 是否涉及到所要求的几个方面,语言（8分） 大小写、标点符号、单词拼写、 词法、句法是否正确 字数是否达标,组织结构分（4分） 内容充实，不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给4分。,组织结构分 通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即 使无语法错误，一般亦不予给组织结构 分。,学会审题 写人物 写事件 写物件 写场所 写感想,03年：To be a lovely Shanghainese （做可爱的上海人） 04年：Leaving school （毕业时分） 05年：Growing pains and gains（成长的烦恼与快乐） 06年：I have a dream （我有一个梦想） 07年：Things I hate to do (我不喜欢) 08年：Love around me （我身边的爱） 09年：I want to do something for my school (我想为学校做点事） 10年：I am proud of myself (我为自己感到自豪) 11年：Im a member of （我是的一员）,要求,1）要用正确的时态 2）要用恰当的词语 3）要用清晰的思路 4）要用不同的句子 5）要用一定的连接,句型单一 东拉西扯 时态错误 用词不当 结构松散 脱离主题 字迹潦草,常见错误,(1) Last week I got an A in the test. (2) Im very happy about it and Ill try my best to learn English better and better. (3) I know it is very important to learn English well. (4) I began to learn English when I was eight years old. (5) However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, Ive made great progress. (6) But sometimes I found it so difficult that I nearly gave it up.,(4) I began to learn English when I was eight years old. (3) I know it is very important to learn English well. (6) But sometimes I found it so difficult that I nearly gave it up. (5) However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, Ive made great progress. (1) Last week I got an A in the test. (2) Im very happy about it and Ill try my best to learn English better and better.,返回,Tom used to go to bed at 2 a.m. He always feel tired and go to see the doctor. The doctor told him that playing computer games for too long is bad for his health. Tom is going to take the doctors advice. He decided to go to bed before 10 oclock every day. His parents were very happy.,返回,Chinglish,I want to buy a present for every taught me teacher. Schools cleaning is everyones face. So our face must be cleaned every day. I want to thank my friendly classmates and husband teacher. Sometime the playground are pieces of paper. Some students look like no see. I want to clean the fans, the fans are tall, but Im not short, so its easily.,返回,My summer holiday plan,This is my summer holiday plan. First I will play football every day. I will run around the park. I will get up at 6:00 a.m After breakfast, I will do a lot of homework. At 12:00 a.m. I will have lunch. At 1:00 p.m. I will play basketball with my friend. At 4:00 p.m. I will go to the supermarket with my mother. My summer holiday plan is very interesting and exciting.,返回,. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。,返回,怎样改进写作,学习写作的步骤和方法 学会套题的技巧和思路 用好题目的提示和问题 使用点睛之句和习语谚语 3 + 1的综合写作模式,Our Last Class Meeting,Our class meeting was held last Sunday. We invited many teachers. We gave a lot of performances. Such as sing, dance. Our teacher gave photos to us. She said something. We said goodbye. We had a good time. We had a great day. We remember the day.,Our Last Class Meeting,Our class meeting was held last Sunday. We invited many teachers to our meeting. We gave a lot of performances, such as singing and dancing. Our class teacher spoke at the meeting. She also took a lot of photos of us. We had a good time. We will always remember the last class meeting.,Our Last Class Meeting,Our class meeting was held last Sunday. We invited many teachers to our meeting. First we gave a lot of performances, such as singing and dancing. Then our class teacher spoke at the meeting. Whats more, she also took a lot of photos of us. On the whole, we had a good time. Needless to say we will always remember the last class meeting.,Last week we had our class meeting. All our teachers joined us in the meeting. Our monitor first talked about our study and life at school and thanked the teachers for their kind help and good care. Then our class teacher made a speech. He hoped that we would keep studying hard. After that we gave each other presents. We sang and danced together until late in the afternoon. We all had a wonderful time and agreed that it was really an unforgettable class meeting.,返回,My Father,My father is a doctor. He is over forty. He is not tall. He is strong. He often helps me with my lessons. He likes reading very much. He works hard in his hospital. He is a good doctor. He is a good father, too.,My Father,My father, who is over forty, is a doctor. He is not tall, but he is strong. He is a good doctor because he works hard in his hospital. He puts all his heart in his work and he is welcomed by all his patients. He likes reading very much and knows a lot. When I meet any difficulty, he will help me. I think that he is not only a good doctor but a good father as well.,返回,My Father,My father, who is over forty, is a doctor. He is not tall, but he is strong. He is a good doctor because he works hard in his hospital. He puts all his heart in his work and he is welcomed by all his patients. He likes reading very much and knows a lot. When I meet any difficulty, he will help me. I think that he is not only a good doctor but a good father as well.,返回,My Opinions about the Internet,Internet,download,search for,information,latest news,fast,convenient,play,games,E-mail,send,watch,matches,Steps towards writing a good paragraph,Step 1 Make sentences using the words or phrases,Sentences we possibly write:,With the Internet，we can get the latest news. The Internet is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it. We can also watch matches of all kinds.,Steps towards writing a good paragraph,Step 2 -How to change the sentences into a well-organized paragraph,The structure of a composition -giving opinions,Topic sentence,Supporting details,Reason 1,Reason 2,Reason 3,Conclusion,Find the topic sentence in the paragraph,I listen to music while driving to work. I listen to music when Im thinking. I listen to music when Im happy. Even when Im sad, I listen to music, too. I cant live without music. Music plays an important part in my life.,Music plays an important part in my life.,Write a topic sentence for the paragraph,With the Internet，we can get the latest news. The Internet is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it. We can also watch various matches.,The Internet plays an important part in our life. The Internet is very useful in our life.,Conclusion: We cant live without the Internet.,How to write a good paragraph,Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. With the Internet，we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games and watch various matches on it. We cant live without the Internet.,Linking words(Framework）,As we all know First, Second, After that, Later on, Last, ,Linking words (transition）,whats more, in addition 表示递进 in fact, as a matter of fact 表示承接 as a result, 表示结果 for example, in other words 表示列举 on the other hand 表示对比 to ones joy/ surprise 表示反应,Linking words（conclusion）,in my opinion 表示想法 anyway, needless to say 表示强调 generally speaking 表示总结 in a word, on the whole 表示结论,Add linking words or phrases to make the supporting details better-organized:,Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. With the Internet，we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games and watch various matches on it. We cant live without the Internet.,My Opinions about the Internet,Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. It is not only fast but convenient as well. We can do many things with the Internet. First of all, we can get the latest news. Secondly, we can find and download information that we need. Whats more, we can send emails to friends. We can even play games and watch various matches on it. In a word, we cant live without the Internet. (74words),My Opinions about traveling,Of all the ways of traveling, I like traveling by train best. First, I neednt worry about traffic jams. Second, the trains are fast and comfortable. You can use the time in different ways. You can just sit and read something, or you can enjoy the scenery out of the window. Third, you can have a meal in the buffet car or sleep in the sleeping car. All in all, traveling by train is my first choice when making a decision.,My Opinions about School Uniforms,In my opinion, school uniform rule must be obeyed. First of all, we dont have to spend time thinking about what to wear every day. Second, we dont need to worry about competing with others based on how we look, either. In addition, we will be careful about how we behave when we wear uniforms because people can easily identify us. In brief, uniforms should be required in schools.,My Opinions about computers,Before computers were widely used, our life was simple and a bit dull. Everything had to be done by hand so that it wasted a lot of time. However, it all changed when we started using computers. Projects can be done on computers, so it saves us time and money. Besides, weve been able to know more since more information is available on the Internet. We are glad to see that these changes have brought us much convenience and enabled us to work faster. In one word, computers have changed our life dramatically.,My life used to be quite simple and boring before computers were widely used. But my way of life has completely changed because of the wide use of the computers. For instance, now I can communicate with my friends more easily by e-mail, and I can download a great deal of information from the Net to solve the problems I come across in my projects as well. Whats more, online shopping has brought me much convenience. All in all, if we use computers in a proper way, these changes will certainly do good to us.,返回,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,2010 初中英语教学与评估（五） “Green” is just another word for “expensive”.,变式 1) “School” is just another word for “family”. 2) “Friend” is just another word for “trust” 3) “Honesty” is just another phrase for “always telling the truth”.,学生实际运用： “Computer” is just another word for “convenience”. 2) To me, “pressure” is just another word for “challenge”. 3) Freedom is based on “obeying rules”. So in my opinion, “rule” is just another word for “freedom”.,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,2010 初中英语教学与评估（八） Nobody can decide the length of life. So we should live the moment.,变式 ： Nobody can decide the length of life, but we can decide its width and depth. 2) Nobody can decide the length of life, so we should save every minute, even every second.,2010 初中英语教学与评估（十） There have been good time and bad time for Stephanie, but she says its important to remember both, because they are the treasure in her life.,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式： There are always good time and bad time for us, but its important to remember both, because they are the treasure in our life. There will be good luck and bad luck in our life, but both are important, because this is life.,Everybody knows that one flower makes no garden.,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式 ： 1) One flower makes no garden, so we should learn to share with others. 2) I finally come to understand the importance of teamwork, because one flower makes no garden.,He thinks that anything is possible as long as you put your mind to it.,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式 1) From this experience, I realize that anything is possible as long as you put your mind to it. 2) From then on, I began to believe in such a famous saying “ Nothing is impossible!”,2010 初中英语教学与评估（十二） Part of Barrack Obamas Back-to-school Speech These people succeeded because they understand that you cant let your failures define you-you have to let them teach you.,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式： 1)What my father said makes me know that I cant let the failure define (decide) me-I have to let it teach me. 2) Failure sometimes is not a bad thing, it is usually the entrance to the success. So do not let the failure decide you-you have to let it teach you.,学生实际运用： 1) We cant let the pressure decide our life-We have to turn it into challenges. (How to deal with the pressure),2010 初中英语教学与评估（十六） This will lead you to a much better understanding and a deeper love. So start with something simple and see what wonderful things can follow,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式： 1) A heart-to-heart talk will lead to a much better understanding and a deeper love (friendship). So start with something simple and see what wonderful things follow 2) Trust will lead to a much better understanding and a deeper love. So start something simple and see what wonderful things follow.,学生实际运用： 1) So lets keep learning and see what a wonderful world is following. (The most important thing in my life) 2) I often talk with my parents about my school life, my problems and my ambition. And they sometimes give me some advice and encouragement. This leads us to a much better understanding and a deeper love. (The most important thing in my life),Sadness and regret filled his heart.,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式： Happiness and excitement fill my heart.,学生实际运用： 1) Tears filled my eyes. (V. S. I was so moved.) 2) Happiness and love fill my heart.,I think she was my friend, is my friend and will be my friend forever.,“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式： In my eyes, he was the best, is the best and will be the best.,学生实际运用： 1) My parents were the best, are the best and will always be the best. I will love them forever. 2) In my heart, my school was the best, is the best and will always be the best!,When buying stops, killing can too. (CCTV 9, 公益广告词),“点睛”句收集整理和变式运用,变式： 1) When our dream stops, the future can too. 2) When trust stops, the friendship can too. 3) When the communication stops, the understanding between us can too.,思考篇,Life goes on, and it never stops for anyone. As Albert Einstein says, “Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance you must keep moving.” Do not stop trying because you are afraid of making mistakes, for you should always know our greatest glory consists not in never falling but in rising every time we fall.,时间从不为任何人停歇。爱因斯坦说：“人生就像骑自行车，想保持平衡就得往前走。”不要因为害怕犯错而停下你的脚步，你应该知道我们最值得自豪的不在于从不跌倒，而是在于每次跌倒之后都爬起来。 学生作文,交友篇,Life has its ups and downs, and only true friends always stay around. As we all know that a friend in need is a friend indeed, true friends do not turn their backs at you when you are in trouble. For that you should know, “Never trust a friend who leaves you at a pinch,“ says Aesop .,真正的朋友会陪伴你走过生活中的高低起伏。患难见真情，这是大家都知道的道理，真正的朋友在你不幸的时候，不会对你置之不理。因此你也应该听过伊索所说的：“千万不要相信在危急时刻离你而去的朋友。”,知足篇,Do not take life for granted. Cherish what you have. The grass is not greener on the other side. Take a moment, think a moment, share the moment with your beloved ones. As