全国各地百套英语模拟试题精选分类解析：短文改错.pdf

-精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - 2012年全国各地百套模拟试题精选分类解析 第五模块短文改错 1. 下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号【】，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线【】划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。 【2012.02 ·桐乡模拟】The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. 短文改错 The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was decided having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought getting dollars about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. when Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, totally more decisive and more creative. Because of I m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told . I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. to advice In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. 0n my 2. 【2012 吉林市普通中学高中毕业班质检】 Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn t like any of them. One day she -精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - saw a board in an office read: “ This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager s office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “ Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “ Yes! ” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn t help saying, “ OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought for a while and said, “ I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “ Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless. V. 短文 改错: Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn t like any of them. but One day she saw a board in an office read : “ This office needs a typist whom can reading who type 200 words a minute . ” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager s office, excited the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “ Do you need a typist?”asked Rose. “ Yes! ” he said. Rose clapped her hand. his hands She couldn t helpsaying, “ OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought for a while and said, “ I will pay you 77 dollars for first three the months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “ Great! answered I will come and work here three months late. ” The manager was speechless. later 3. 【2012·宝鸡一次质检】 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写 的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增 加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。 注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。 Dear Wei Fang, It s a long time since I heard from you in last lime Now I' d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for schoolHe stood outside the classroom silentI smiled to him and let him come After a while, he began to cry Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for herAt the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother“ for the studentsFrom then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help themDo you think so? I'm looking forward to your -精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - reply 4. 【2012·西安一次质检】I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was good trip at te beginning and something unexpected happened half way. One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldn t move any far. Nobody knew what to do it. One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him rested in it. He took some medicine. Then he drink some water, and ate some food. After while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain. 5. -精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - 【2012.02 ·桐乡模拟】你的同学刘芳乐于助人(helpful)，积极乐观 (positive)。她在 上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。请根据题示，用英语写一篇短文向英语报 English Times投稿，简要叙述她做好事的经过，并谈谈你的感想。 What happened ·an old man seriously hurt in the leg ·what Liu Fang did Your opinion · misunderstanding or even trouble, or the right thing? · Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently. _ One possible version: Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently. Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came and took the man to hospital. When everything was OK, she left for school. Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Though there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, if you don t offer your help when others are in trouble, how can you expect help from others when you are in trouble? Therefore, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn t it? (131 words) 6. 【2012 西安五校一模】The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don t want me go out. They are afraid I ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them. The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at makes to relaxing myself. I d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play movies the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I ll have during the winter holiday! the What -精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - However, my parents think different. They don t want me go out. They are afraid I ll be differently to knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose fall my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to kept so persuade them. 7.【2012 辽宁重点中学协作体期末】 On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “ Green Eyes ” , was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. Under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delightful I think it s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it. 【答案】 On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “ Green Eyes ” , was having an were environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They caught picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. Under up might/could their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delightful I think it s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the 去掉 of delighted them public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we -精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - 去掉 the in which/ that/ 去掉 get along well with it. 8. 【2012 郑州预测】 Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman ，who had been teaching English for more than 20 yearsShe is always working hard For a model teacher for many years， she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us. In class ，she always encourages us speak and read English as much as possibleShe is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting In her spare She In time ，she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short playsShe loves us so 10 much as she is always ready to help usIn the fact ，she is not only our good teacher but also our good friendWe all respect and love him Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman, who had been teaching English for more than has 20 years. She is always working hard. For a model teacher for many years, she is kind and friendly As / Being to us and very strict with us. In class, she always encourages us speak and read English as but to much as possible. She is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting. In tries lively her spare time, she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short plays. She songs loves us so much as she is always ready to help us. In the fact, she is not only our good teacher but that (删除 as 亦可 ) also our good friend. We all respect and love him. her 9. 【2012·南阳期终 】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以 下作文。 文中共有10 处错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号【】，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线【】划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10 处，多者【从第11 处起】不计分。 The day is my Dad s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought present for him. Then I took the subway train to home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train and stood in front of me. She looked tiring. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seen her smile, I felt happily. I will always ready to help others in the future. 第二句 present 前加 a； 第三句 home 前的 to 去掉；第四句 will 改为 would,she 改为 he; 第 -精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - 五句 bag 改为 bags,into 改为 on;第六句 tiring 改为 tired;第九句 Seen改为 Seeing, happily 改为 happy;第十句 always 后加 be 10 【2012·银川一中模拟】I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there. 短文改错： I just come back from Britain last week . I was luckily enough to be came lucky one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to students 28. We paid a visit to many places ,like London, Oxford or and the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much which many more old buildings . The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity a that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing we exciting for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there. 11. 【2012 陕西澄城期末】 Nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health, but how to keep health? First, it is necessary to take any exercise every dayResearch shows that get plenty of exercise makes the heart beat fast and the lungs work harderSecond, eat more fruits, vegetable and less meat Third, getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthy Smoking and alcohol drinking injures one s health a great deal, and therefore should be given up If people fol low these three ways of keeping fit, they ll great improve their health -精品文档 ! 值得拥有！ - -珍贵文档 ! 值得收藏！ - 【参考答案】 第一句中的concerning 改为 concerned，考察词组be concerned about sb /sth关心、挂念 某人 /某事； health 改为 healthy，因为 keep 为连系动词，后面要跟形容词。 第二句中 any 改为 some，any 一般用于疑问句或否定句中，在肯定句中意为“任何”。 第三句中get 改为 getting，在句中作宾语从句的主语；fast 改为 faster，与 harder 保持 一致。 第四句中改为vegetables，这是可数名词 第五句中 as 改为 like，as作介词用意为“作为，当时候”，like 作介词用意为“像， 比如，诸如之类” ；important 前加 an，因为 way 是可数名词。 第六句中 injures 改为 injure，smoking and alcohol drinking 为并列主语，动词要用复数。 第七句中 great 改为 greatly，修饰动词improve 要使用副词。 12. 【2012 杭州十四中期中】 One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference. whilewhen ushim so-but has-had checked-check call in 去掉 use-using little 前加 a thatwhat really-real 13. 云南省部分名校高2012 届第一次统一考试 【玉溪一中、昆明三中、楚雄一中】 Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don t have enough times to do that I m interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. It s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how I m fee