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作文训练模板：校园火灾Fire Prevention on Campus1.前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失2.分析火灾发生的原因3.作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生审题概述这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。【范文】Fire Prevention on CampusPeople are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?”A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文语言点提示：（1）此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies? 常可作为过渡句，引出下文（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如are alarmed by，were reported，were burned down，were damaged，Faced with。第二段思路点评：论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂语言点提示：electric water-heaters电热水器第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first, second, lastly。语言点提示：take precautions采取预防措施fire extinguisher灭火器作文训练模板：校园盗窃案Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生2. 物品被盗的原因3. 学生如何加强防盗意识审题概述这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts“If you dont want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, youd better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, theyll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, its advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.第一段思路点评：陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况语言点提示：it seems that此句型表示一种可能性第二段思路点评：说明被盗原因语言点提示：（1）What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文（2）anti-theft alertness防盗意识（3）lack of alertness缺乏警惕（4）light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的第三段思路点评：阐述如何加强防盗意识语言点提示：注意关联词语in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。作文训练模板：网络依赖症How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行3. 你对网络依赖症的看法 审题概述本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。【范文一】How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if theyd seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.第一段思路点评：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。语言点提示：has drawn, realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。语言点提示：resort to借助、诉诸、求助于第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。语言点提示：（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者（3）fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗作文训练模板：大学生报考公务员Craze for Civil Service Examinations1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员2. 引起此现象的原因3. 你的看法 审题概述本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。第一段，主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈你对此的观点。【范文】Craze for Civil Service ExaminationsEvery year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that cant be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as its also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, its quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.第一段思路点评：第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。语言点提示：liberal arts majors文科专业学生第二段思路点评：先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。语言点提示：（1）On the one handOn the other起到衔接上文作用（2）is attributable to归因于（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济第三段思路点评：重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。语言点提示：beyond reproach无可厚非作文训练模板：课外培训班Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要3. 你的观点 审题概述这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段，概述各种各样培训班的状况。第二段，论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。【范文】Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that its far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head.As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.第一段思路点评：第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起，第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。语言点提示：（1）a great diversity of各种各样的（2）mushrooming迅速扩散、增加（3）language crash courses语言速成课程第二段思路点评：先用一句对比式地摆出两种不同的观点，再分别详述他们的看法。语言点提示：注意连接词语while，The former，They，The latter group of people等的使用，强化了上下文之间的连贯性。第三段思路点评：辩证地论述你对参加各类培训班的看法。语言点提示：（1）as far as I am concerned我认为，就我而言（2）counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的作文训练模板：大学生追求名牌University Students Pursuit of Famous Brands1. 现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌，用名牌2. 你对这种现象的看法 审题概述这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，详述大学生热衷追求、使用名牌的情形以及人们的看法。第二段，重点谈你对此的看法。【范文】University Students Pursuit of Famous Brands“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Arent your shoes Nikes latest release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack &Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?” Dont feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. Its quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction “If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?”About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. Theyll probably take it to be a reflection of the students vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, theres nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isnt it?第一段思路点评：本段分为两个部分，即详细陈述大学生追求和使用名牌的情况，以及人们对此的看法。语言点提示：（1）keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物质上比得上周围的人（2）conviction坚定的信仰、看法作文训练模板：山寨现象The Rise of Shanzhai Culture1. 最近兴起了一股“山寨热”2. 你如何看待山寨现象 审题概述本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨热。第二段，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点，即山寨产品的非法性。【范文】：The Rise of Shanzhai CultureThe vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other peoples risks.第一段思路点评：综述山寨热现象。语言点提示：public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用第二段思路点评：主要阐述山寨产品的优势。语言点提示：（1）mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新（2）respond to the market对市场做出反应第三段思路点评：主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。语言点提示：（1）The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌（2）thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣（3）legal loopholes法律漏洞（空子）（4）Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下（5）violating intellectual property rights违反知识产权（6）evading taxes逃税（7）plagiarism剽窃、抄袭作文训练模板：文凭越高越吃香Knowledge and Diploma1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识3. 你的观点 审题概述这是一篇论述高文凭与知识关系的文章。第一段，概述社会上文凭越高越吃香的看法。第二段，主要论述有些人文凭不等于知识的观点。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。【范文】：Knowledge and DiplomaIt is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesnt automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in the