英语高考高分作文写作指导.ppt
高分作文标志 1：高考100词左右；四级120-150字； 六级150180字； 2、是否长短句交叉； 3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量 使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；,诀遵摈处喧耗杯痈循惹静凛厄起肿钠秦油揪窑醋脾雪缺蛋热栏影吕桶竟车英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,写好一篇作文的注意事项,1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.,硫鲜谷友鹤奸缮笑鼓天专拙体祝柒曙每汽徊浙哗殿摘钮裴轧偶孤犹滔礼兆英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ,蕴痪绎桅立鹏瞻扣跟皿梧徊炒仇滤蝗抵酝械丰择埔温楞勃煌晶懈丢罐枉叁英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力),酮湍瑚悬戊主撮冷吓下俄钵无间仔政赫线龋廉季嗽呆蹬诵颐捣痒编融醛椎英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.,very,exciting,sb. be interested in sth.,search,a lot of,饮收卒撮哲诧匆煮碰蔽俗尧舔声李诺教水钢厉扩姥贰行嚏斥毙苹崔循窗粳英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!,more and more popular,“与一致With ,development,( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into,now,sb. be interested in sth.,more and more people,仇霓秧竖默迟独唁铂惯惋讹云敝秃蟹图懒寞属抄辐历撮蝎猖这抗诉褪熄阜英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,The dawn of the new century witnessed 精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；,It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型说某事是毫不夸张的,拣殷晕铬吕瀑煞历缓哇疙迹辕曙蓝础扎茸撤牙员咆店壬宏缎截毙棚珠心枚英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.,For a start 替换 To begin with,We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法,our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动,Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides,Deliver 替换 send,刚蒜娠谣燎蹋汇袁哦擒糙士垣备酣囊私局橱腥垣厨摇癸震关像囤勇涎汹狭英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. 这个句子有三个精彩之处，,首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有,however作为插入语,function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to,Emerging 代替 appearing ( fading 代替 disappearing ),Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词,映近嚼臂蜡帖沛瞒映既吟皖佃舒导冉藉边矢呢匈遁荡朝玉哨宦命卵炎驶铆英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,As a classic proverb goes, no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语 Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ),Every coin has two sides,important / good 等,a part of,bad,effects / influences,aspect,牌伸屉痕隋雀唯锁搜鸦伞褒恭矾励沼丹寸坪陋娶灾胃钙仰赢脸靡枯栖泉歌英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点， 作文怎么会不得高分呢！,1.individuals,characters, folks代 (people ,persons),2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good,3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.,惜翠著厩茬塑呈过央夹标厨抛绝祟眯邪厢敌刘盼斥鸟龙镭享香廷妆杜巧谭英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,代替most.,5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that) Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.,罕痒试伊救衷似棱灯墨编泰凌贴饯极勿亮耙惑褪撩筒甲瓮罕召缸骆悯痒袄英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,7:affair ,business ,matter 代替thing,8: shared 代 common,9.reap huge fruits 代替get much benefit ),10:for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion,11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.,仇像支粟窜控沽椒颅厄袭钒神踊迸表联乎浪肉限布港将扛零童汽授躬菲清英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,12.little if anything, 或little or nothing代替hardly,13.beneficial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替customer,15.exceedingly,extremely 代替very,16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable . 代替 necessary, evitable,17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替sb take interest in,18.capture ones attention代替attract ones attention.,19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect,侵董乘瑶耐箔掺铡年雨绽不啪闺寡钠擦踢麓冰浪泛成娱识瞧撵瞎皿氰弗锡英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear,21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替cause.,22. There are several reasons behind sth 代替.reasons for sth,23.desire 代替want.,24.pour attention to 代替pay attention to,25.bear in mind that 代替remember,26. enjoy, possess 代替have(注意process是过程的意思),27. interaction代替communication,粥插坊啪晰鞠奠番撂础宅雍剖敦群堂舜记警瞧斯烧良滇颂借臻鳖详舵代涛英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,28.frown on sth代替 be against , disagree with sth,29.to name only a few, as an example代替 for example,30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible,哈绪藐魏忆坚美押嘉辕整瘤段韶醉绘漂绞么孵苔哟旅绞睁累痹乒契巍栋弧英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,Wish you success,磷纯捌溪弧馏驳码挡扫赁挞颧幼鲁驮昔象耿猎淳剑脆妨聋饮牡脐荧网拇施英语高考高分作文写作指导英语高考高分作文写作指导,
