英语高考基础写作_说明文(地点介绍).ppt

Expository Writing,How to introduce a place,近年考试对说明文体裁的考查,Practice: Fill in the blanks of the introduction of Canada,【写作内容】 模拟题 假如你是来自加拿大的留学生Jason，请你写文章介绍一下加拿大。内容包括以下要点：,【写作要求】 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 把5个句子组成连贯的短文。,Main problems in writing 1. language: inaccurate 2. main points: disorganized,1.东西跨越5500千米，6个时区 2.气候差异大 3.西部沿海 4.淡水、 渔业资源,cover an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west /six time zones,Difficult points in the writing,the west coast,fresh water/ fishing resources,vary from place to place,_ (cover) an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west _ six of the worlds time zones and with Ottawa _ its capital, Canada is the _ (two) largest country in the world. _ population of Canada is about 29 million and there are two _ (office) languages, French and English.,Covering,as,second,The,official,A possible version (语法填空)：,with,_ in China, the weather in Canada is different _ area to area. In the north, the winters are long and hard, _ the west coast of Canada is a fairly warm place in winter. Canada has one third of the worlds supply of fresh water, abundant forests and fishing _ (resource).,As,from,while,resources,How to organize the main points in 5 sentences and make the passage fluent?,【写作内容】 模拟题2 假如你是来自加拿大的留学生Jason，请你写文章介绍一下加拿大。内容包括以下要点：,Covering an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones and with Ottawa as its capital, Canada is the second largest country in the world. The population of Canada is about 29 million and there are two official languages, French and English. As in China, the weather in Canada is different from area to area. In the north, the winters are long and hard, while the west coast of Canada is a fairly warm place in winter. Canada has one third of the worlds supply of fresh water, abundant forests and fishing resources.,Covering an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones and with Ottawa as its capital, Canada is the second largest country in the world.,Possible versions for Sentence,As the second largest country in the world, Canada covers an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones , with Ottawa as its capital.,Canada, with an area of over 5,500 kilometers from east to west with six of the worlds time zones is the second largest country in the world, with Ottawa as its capital,The population of Canada is about 29 million and there are two official languages, French and English.,Possible versions for Sentence,Canada, whose official languages are French and English, has the population of 29 million.,Useful expressions,Aspects for the place introduction,Location(位置): Area（面积）: History（历史）: Population（人口）:,be located/situated in/on/at/to; lie in/on/at/to in the center of; in/to/on the east of,Useful expressions,cover/have an area of; with an area of It is long/wide (from east to west).,have/with a history ofyears date from/ date back to,have/with a (large) population (of) The population ofis percent of the population are,5. Climate（气候）: 6. Resources（资源）: 7. Tourist attractions（旅游景点）:,The climate varies/is different from place to place neither too hot nor too cold,Useful expressions,be rich/wealthy in; with abundant resources be famous/well-known for/as mainly produce The main agricultural products are,places of interest scenic spots resort (旅游胜地),Lets have a try !,实战训练： 假如你是刘风，大运会即将在深圳举行。你作为一个大运会志愿者，向来访的外国游客介绍深圳-我国一个重要东南沿海城市，位于广东省南部， 人口超过一千万。,欢乐谷 Happy Valley 世界之窗 Window of the world 锦绣中华 Splendid China 红树林 Red Wood 海上田园 Sea Garden 仙湖植物园 Fairylake Garden 小梅沙 Xiao Mei Sha 海洋世界 Sea World 明斯克航母 Minsk Aircraft Carrier 东部华侨城 OCT East,沿海城市 2. 四季如春，气候宜人 3. 经济特区 4. 大运会,a mild temperate climate, with spring all the year around,Difficult points in the writing,special economic zones,the Universiade,coastal /seaside/seashore city,实战训练： 假如你是刘风，大运会即将在深圳举行。你作为一个大运会志愿者，向来访的外国游客介绍深圳-我国一个重要东南沿海城市，位于广东省南部， 人口超过一千万。,Shenzhen, a key seaside city, is located in the southern part of Guangdong Province,with a population of more than 10 million. It has a mild temperate climate, with spring all the year around. That is the reason why it becomes one of the well-known travelling resorts in China with a good many scenic spots, some of which are Happy Valley, Window of the World and Xiao Mei Sha. As one of the special economic zones in China, Shenzhen has been developing rapidly. What excites us most is that more and more people in Shenzhen get involved in sports, which makes it a host city of the 2011.,【写作内容】 假如你为学校英文报刊的“海外之声”栏目投稿，请你根据以下内容写一篇短文介绍澳大利亚。,【写作要求】 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 把5个句子组成连贯的短文。,Australia _ _,Australia, the largest country in Oceania, lies on the west coast of the Pacific, with an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,Possible versions for Sentence,As the largest country in Oceania, Australia lies on the west coast of the Pacific, covering an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,Located on the west coast of the Pacific, Australia is the largest country in Oceania, covering/with an area of 7.6 million square kilometers.,It has a small population of over 10 million and most of its population live in the east of the country by the sea.,Possible versions for Sentence,It has a small population of over 10 million, most of which live in the east coast of the country.,Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest and the Opera House is well known all over the world.,Possible versions for Sentence,Sydney, the biggest city in Australia, has many places of interest including the world famous Opera House.,Sydney is the biggest city in Australia with many places of interest including the world famous Opera House.,Australia, the largest country in Oceania, lies on the west coast of the Pacific, with an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a a small population of over 10 million, most of whom live in the east coast of the country. The capital city Canberra, where you can enjoy beauiful scenery, attracts a good many people every year. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest and the Opera House is well known all over the world. It was in this place that the 2000 Olympics were held.,