雅思写作双饼图写法介绍——pie chart.ppt

How to write pie chart? amy 2015/3/20 review 35% 30% 15% 15% 5% 1.Readthetitleand Analyzethenumber 2.Organizethearticle Introduction Body Conclusion the biggest one 最大的 the smallest one 最小的 the same two 数量一样的 阅读题目和分析数据 文章组织 占多少比例： occupy, represent, constitute, make up, take up, account for, 1.Malesaccountedfor10%ofthewholeworkforce. 2.Studentsmakeup/takeuproughly20%ofthe group. words today 表示剩余：名词：therest=theremainder 1.Duringtheremainderofthemorning,hehelped hisauntwithsomehousework. 形容词：remaining 2.Theremaining18%wastakenupbythecostof medicalcare. be made up of, be composed of,consist of 1.Society is made up of people with different abilities. 2. The workforce of Great Britain is composed of five parts rocket-up obvious traditional sector distribution population tremendous aggressive shrink收缩的 department of agriculture industrial sector 由组成（整体）由（部分）组成 words today 农业部门 飞涨明显的 传统部门分布 劳动力分布Distribution of workforce 人口 巨大的进攻的， 巨大的 shrankshrunk 工业部门 The two pie charts below show the distribution of workforce from 16 years old to 65 in Great Britain in 1932 and 1992 P1标题改写（替换、添加与变换） vThe two pie chartsillustratethe distributional situation of labor force between the ages of 16 and 65in two differentyearsinUK. The two pie charts below show the distribution of workforce from 16 years old to 65 in Great Britain in 1932 and 1992 In 1932, 25% of the people between 16 and 65 were unemployed. Of those who had a job, the largest percentage of the population (45%) chose to work in the industrial sector Only 3% of the workers were employed by the government.(被动句) , which was followed by those in the service sector (15%) and the department of agriculture and fishing (12%). P2 P2:针对图一，进行排序描写 vCompared with the year 1932, 1992 witnessed tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors. v The proportion of the unemployed significantly shrank to only 10%. P3开头部分 P3的开头部分：概括说明变化 As for the employed, dramatic expansion took place in the sector of government and service industry to about 52% and 15% respectively. Noticeably, government workforce witnessed the most obvious change, which is 5 times that of the previous 3% in 1932. However, for the more traditional sectors, there was a considerable decrease from 15% to 8% in agriculture and fishing ，and a more aggressive deduction can be detected (被动) in the sector of industry from 42% to about 15%. P3对比图一，描写图二上升情况 P3对比图一，描写图二下降情况 P3剩余部分 学会用插入语 vIn conclusion, during the 60 years chosen, the number of the unemployed and the amount of labor force in the traditional sectors like agriculture and industry declined, while government employee and workforce in the service industry saw a rocket-up. P4总结特点 P4开头部分 体会如何写长长句： v插入语语 vLike结结构 v非谓语谓语 vWhile表对对比结结构 v从句 summary写作思路 vP1:改写标题 vP2:排序（图一） vP3：对比（结合图一对比，写出 图二变化情况） vP4：结尾 homework 1.Write words and recite those words（抄写 并记忆） 2.翻译下面2个句子（为不局限思维，题目只给出了词组 ，可根据你的理解去翻译，每题至少翻译两个版本，多种翻 译的途径通常是通过采用不同主语，或者主动、被动，或者 从句，非谓语等实现的） 1)1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多， 占了42% 2)与1932年相比，在1992年，很多部门都有 明显的变化 饼图句型分析1 v表达：1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，42% （1）In 1932, most of the people (42%)worked in the industrial sector. （2）There were 42% of the people (largest portion) working in the industrial sector. （3）Thepeople working in the industrial sector occupied 42 % of the total labor force, which was the most significant part of all. （4）The people who worked in the industrial sector made up 42% of the total labor force, which was the most significant of all. 非谓语现在分词 非谓语定语从句 1：多句式结合：基本句型 /there be/ 非谓语/从句 基本句式 therebe 句式分析2主动被动 v In 1932, 42% of the people worked in the industrial sector, which was the largest portion of the total labor force. v42% of the people working in the industrial sector was the largest portion of the total labor force. v 42% of the people(largest portion) were employed in theindustrial sector. v The people employed in the industrial sector covered 42% of the total. 主动 2：主动被动交互使用 被动 分词表被动 非谓语现在分词表主动 句式分析3多样化主语 v42% of the people worked in the industrial sector, which was the largest portion of the total labor force. vRelatively, the industrial sector attracted the largest amount of workforce (42%) in 1932. vComparatively, working in the industrial sector would be most peoples choice (42%) among all the sectors in 1932. v1932 witnessed the fact that working in the industrial sector became most peoples choice (42%). 动作发出者做主语 某个对象做主语 非谓语做主语 时间做主语 比较中必写句型 v与1932年相比，在1992年，很多部门都有 明显的变化。 vCompared with the year 1932, there were tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors. vCompared with the year 1932, 1992 saw tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors.