读后续写微技能指导系列1——环境描写课件（共13张PPT）.pptx
读后续写微技能指导 环境描写,环境描写，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以让文章读起来有立体感和真实感。,写作思路： 第一步，先尝试概括性描述（总体描述）。 第二步，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。,I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.(M1U1),关于天气炎热的描写,用天热衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有： （热）；（融化）；（汗流浃背）；（热得吓人）,翻译练习： 1）天气很闷热。（概括描写）,1）The weather was so hot . 1)This weather is terrible.,hot；melt；sweat like a pig；terrible,翻译练习（细节描写）： 2）天气很闷热，我汗流浃背。 2）天气很闷热，一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。 2）天气很闷热，我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。,2)This weather is terrible, I am sweating like a pig.,2）The weather was so hot that there was no wind, and the thick air seemed to be frozen.,2）The weather was so hot that I can hardly breathe.I hope it will be cooler soon.,关于雨的描写,翻译练习： 1）下起了大雨。（概括描写）,用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有： 大暴雨; 下倾盆大雨; 被雨淋,1）It was raining cats and dogs. 1） There was a heavy downpour.,a heavy downpour 大暴雨 rain cats and dogs 下倾盆大雨 be caught in the rain 被雨淋,翻译练习（细节描写）： 2）下起了大雨，溪水上张，风吹着拍打着房子。 2）下起了大雨，我到家时全湿了。,2）It was raining cats and dogs. And I was all wet when I got home.,2）It was raining cats and dogs, the streams rose and the winds blew and beat against the house.,The wind was _ dreadfully and the rain was_from the heaven, _ against the branches of lined tress.,howling,pouring,whipping,specific,surrounding scenes?,1. As _, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.,2. _(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.,the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed,The gentle breeze,3. From the distance, he saw _(昏暗的灯光) in the village.,some dim light,Para.1 He took the strawberries home.(a sentence),Practice 1,1. .it was dark. (增加细节描写),The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.,2016.10 浙江高考真题 Para 1 But no more helocopteres came and it was getting dark again._,She had no choice but to stop for another night. A gust of cold wind blew and she started to miss the warmth of Toms hug.,Practice 2,1. It got dark. (增加细节描写),2018.06 浙江高考真题 Para 2 We had no idea where we were and it got dark._,Silence between dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.,Practice 3,1. We saw lots of great sights along the way. (增加细节描写),2017.11 浙江高考真题 Para 2 We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._,Practice 4,The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power. Book1 “Annes Best Friend”,I closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.,The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined tress.The world was burdened with a sea of drakness. _ _ _,a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.,I was seized with the roaring power of nature,The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined tress.The world was burdened with a sea of drakness. _ _,A flood of fear washing over me, I immediately turned,1.,2.,around to slide into the bed and curled up.,“景”“情” 过渡，过渡要融洽,更融洽？,续写一个段落，努力用上环境描写,Homework,
