如何提升中考英语作文.ppt
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1、如何提升中考英语作文,命题人是怎么想的?,试题的设置一般都提供一定的情景内容,内容多与学生日常生活实际相联系。提供情景内容的形式有材料、提纲、图表或图画等。试题也注重考查考生表达个人思想、再现生活经历、描述周边任务以及发表相关观点的能力。,见初中毕业生学业考试复习用书P76,准备中考英语作文(24个热点话题),My dream Low-carbon life My feelings when leaving school Happiness School safety How to behave well My teacher / my friends / parents/family My
2、school day / life My hobby My favourite animal,准备中考英语作文热点话题,My childhood My hero A holiday journey in the past My school life / My dream school How to keep healthy The Spring Festival My hometown How to learn English,Writing about animals in danger How to protect our environment Save water Mobile ph
3、ones Homework / study /pressure Communication,准备中考英语作文热点话题,阅卷人是怎么想的?,谁是阅卷人?,他们工作时心情如何?,一半高中老师,一半初中老师。,不太好!,评分依据是什么?,第五档:(18-20分)内容完整,表达清楚;语言基本无误;行文连贯,能使用修饰词或表示顺序、逻辑关系的连接词。鼓励使用高级词汇与丰富的句子结构。 第四档:(14-17分)内容较完整,表达较清晰;行文基本连贯;语言有少量错误。 第三档:(10-13分)内容基本完整,表达基本清晰;语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。 第二档:(6-9分)语言错误多,影响意思表达;错误百出,不知
4、所云。 第一档:(0-5分)白卷或文不对题,只抄写了提示词。,评分标准:,好文章的明显特征(解读评分标准),2、分段,条理清晰,3、有过渡词,过渡句,5、开头要点题,结尾要归题。,1、书写工整、优美,4、有高级词汇、优美句子如:谚语、倒装句、感叹句、后置定语从句、复合句、强调句、比喻等修辞方式,富有文采。,怎么提升?,有高级词汇、优美句子如:谚语、倒装句、感叹句、后置定语从句、复合句、强调句、比喻等修辞方式,富有文采。,不同表达:钟爱/热爱/着迷/,如何提升词汇?,例如:喜欢,1.When I talk with my classmates after class, I feel happy.
5、第三档,Whenever I talk with my classmates after class, I feel relaxed and pleased.,From 普通句式to优美句式,How pleased I am when I talk with my classmates after class!,第四档,第五档,如何提升句子?,2.When I get a good mark in my exam, I feel happy.,When getting a good mark in my exam, I feel cheerful and proud.,Getting a go
6、od mark in my exam, I feel cheerful and proud.,To my joy, I usually get good marks in the exams.,3.When I have a lot of homework, I feel bored.,I have so much homework to do that I feel bored.,I have so much homework to do, which makes me bored.,4. When I do badly in the exam, I feel bored.,To my sa
7、dness, I sometimes do badly in the exam.,Because of my poor study, I feel sad and bored.,Doing badly in the exam makes me bored.,一句多译,彰显扎实的语言功底,Mike is fond of /is interested in reading. Mike shows great interest in reading. Reading is his favorite/ Mikes hobby. Reading plays an important part in Mi
8、kes life. Mike is a fan of reading. Mike is crazy about/is keen on reading. Mike is addicted to reading. Mike feels like/ enjoys/ loves reading.,1. 迈克喜欢阅读。,Its great fun for Mike to read different kinds of books. Mike cant help reading if he is free. Mike spends a lot of time reading in his free tim
9、e. It takes Mike a lot of time to read when he is free. Nothing is more important than reading for Mike . Mike fell in love with reading when he was young.,1. 迈克喜欢阅读。,方法一:旧文重写,Hi, Li Li! Im Lucy. I think English is easy and fun. Here is my advice on how to improve your English. Firstly, you should a
10、lways speak English in class and after class. Secondly, read some English books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times. Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free. Last but not least, in your spare time, What about making some foreign pen friends and writing email
11、 messages in English to each other. Well, if you do these every day, I think your English will be better .,How to learn English(无错误但非高分作文),如何对句子进行修饰与提升:,1.Firstly, you should always speak English in class and after class,,Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”,2.Secondly, read some Engli
12、sh books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times.,It can not only improve your reading skill but also help you widen your sights.,The more you read, the better your reading skill will be.,3.Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free.,Nothing is difficult, if you pu
13、t your heart into it.,Hi, Li Li! Im Lucy. I think English is easy and fun. Here is my advice on how to improve your English. Firstly, you should always speak English in class and after class. Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”Secondly, read some English books and read English newspap
14、ers like 21st Century Teens and The Times. It can not only improve your reading skills but also help you widen your sights. Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free. Nothing is difficult, if you put your heart into it. Last but not least, in your spare time, What about making some foreign
15、 pen friends and writing emails in English to each other. Well, if you do these every day, I think your English will be better .,经修改提升的好文章,如:描写人物外貌、性格特征的词汇,kind, helpful, outgoing, humorous, easy-going, hardworking, brave, clever, bright, polite, honest, friendly, smart, naughty, warm- hearted,be po
16、pular with, be kind to, be interested in, be fond of, with the help of, be proud of, take pride in,neither tall nor short ,short dark hair , small eyes, strong, thin, short fair hair, a pair of glasses,方法二:帮助学生整理并扩充词汇,如:描写人物可用的一些句型,not only but also He is not only strong, but also very tall. He is n
17、ot only my best teacher, but also my best friend. He not only makes his class lively and interesting, but also gives us his deep love. Li Hua is not only an excellent student but also a helpful and kind person.,方法三:帮助学生整理并扩充句子,2. so that She is so humorous and knowledgeable that we are all her fans.
18、 She is so kind that she is always ready to help others. Im so lucky that I have such a good mother. My English teacher helps me so much that I make much progress in my study. Im so thankful to Miss Wang that I will study harder and repay her.,3.感叹句. How lucky I am to be your friend! What a kind and
19、 helpful girl she is! What a great mother she is! How moved I feel to know what she has done for me!,4. 定语从句 In my life, therere lots of people I want to thank, but the person who I want to thank most is my mother. She is the most hardworking girl that I have ever seen. He is willing to help others
20、who are in trouble. Im outgoing and easygoing, which helps me to make a few friends.,5. 同位语 My sister, a lovely girl, works very hard and often smiles at others. Lao She, a great writer, is famous for his play Teahouse. My maths teacher, a middle-aged man, is full of humor and energy. Mike, my best
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