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1、新东方 托福写作强化课堂,主讲人:廖歆,师傅领进门,自虐靠个人,我的课的三个宗旨: 面向考试、提高成绩、求真务实,过去我们总是,翻译,国内的考试题,假设你是李华,作为选派的交流生在美国某中学学习了一年,寄住在Mr.Brown家里,刚回到国内,给他写了一封信,内容为 帮助寄回忘带回的字典; 感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助; 邀请他到中国旅游。 要求字数不少于80字,写作是表达而不是翻译,过去的人冬天没有暖气,出门见不到汽车,连吃肉都困难,哪有什么幸福可言?,怎么表达比较好?,过去的人冬天没有暖气,出门见不到汽车,连吃肉都困难,哪有什么幸福可言? 过去的人们感觉不幸福,因为没有暖气,他们在冬天会感觉
2、到寒冷;没有汽车,难以到达远方;很难找到肉吃,没有营养。,过去的人们感觉不幸福,因为没有暖气,他们在冬天会感觉到寒冷;没有汽车,难以到达远方;很难找到肉吃,没有营养。 People in the past didnt feel happy. They felt cold without radiators; they found it hard to reach remote places without automobiles; they were malnourished without meat on their tables.,是这样翻译的,过去的人冬天没有暖气,出门见不到汽车,连吃肉
3、都困难,哪有什么幸福可言? over the past were no heating in winter, out did not see a car, and even meat are difficult, so how happy is that?,可怕的学生直译,过去的人冬天没有暖气,出门见不到汽车,连吃肉都困难,哪有什么幸福可言? The past people in winter do not have heating gas, can see car exit door, where have what happiness can say?,表达下面这句话,出国留学可以学习知识
4、,增强阅历,为未来打下基础! gain, obtain, acquire, increase, develop, accumulate,出国留学帮助我们积累知识,获得新的经验,为未来做准备。 Studying abroad helps us accumulate knowledge, gain new experience and prepare ourselves for the future.,通过出国留学,我们积累了知识,获得了新的经验,为未来做了准备。 By studying abroad, we accumulate knowledge, gain new experience an
5、d prepare ourselves for the future.,prepare concern excite disappoint frustrate,表达下面这句话,越来越多的孩子患有网瘾,分数下降得厉害,身心健康也受到危害。,More and more children become addicted to the internet, resulting in falling grades and poor physical and mental condition. More and more children spend too much time on surfing on
6、line. As a result, they are no longer willing to spend their time on study and sports.,表达下面这句话,学习艺术可以陶冶情操,Appreciating arts and music is a character education. Appreciating arts and music helps students mold and shape their characters. Appreciating arts and music teaches values and virtues.,写作是表达而不是
7、翻译 无处不在,坏电影害人; 孩子们受够了坏电影; 孩子们饱受坏电影之苦; 烂片大行其道,孩子不堪其扰; 坏电影让孩子生活在水深火热之中 suffer,Children suffer from bad movies. Children suffer a lot from those improper movies. Children suffer a lot from the flood/inundation of improper movies.,考砸了,我想死的心都有了; I suffer a lot from the low grade in my last exam; 你这馊主意会害人
8、不浅; People will suffer a lot from your bad idea. 你磨磨唧唧的,搞死我了都; I suffer a lot from your delayed decision.,倩女幽魂 Beautiful girl, lingering soul. A Chinese Ghost Story 满城尽带黄金甲 The city is full of golden armor. The curse of golden flower.,十面埋伏 Ten face ambush The house of flying dagger 仙剑奇侠传 Immortal sw
9、ord and strange hero legend The legend of the swordman,How to train a dragon? 怎样训练一只龙呢? 驯龙高手 We do chicken right! 我们 烹鸡美味,尽在肯德基!,句子的三种训练方法,多种方法表达同一句意; 扩充丰富已有句型; 对句式进行各种变换。,我认为,我同意这个观点:勤奋才能成功。,I think I agree with the idea: I will succeed if I work hard.,用高级词汇替换低级词汇,I insist that I support the announ
10、cement: I will succeed if I spare no effort for working.,添加副词和形容词,I unavoidably insist that I strongly support the classical announcement: I will definitely succeed if I spare no effort for working.,找出潜在的逻辑关系,I unavoidably insist that based on my personal experiences and education, I strongly suppor
11、t the classical announcement: final success results from hard work.,去掉累赘,变成地道又简略的表达,Based on my personal experiences and educational background, I strongly support the classical saying: final success comes from continual hard work.,I think I agree with the idea: I will succeed if I work hard. Based
12、on my personal experiences and educational background, I strongly support the classical saying: final success comes from continual hard work.,学生最常犯错误,拼写错误,effecient; televition; seperate; listenning; Infomation; newpapers;,aginst; satelite; comminute; indispensible; programmme; changable,低级语法错误,all
13、people is fond of seeing tv; he buy a newspaper in the way home; as far as I am concerned, in my opinion, undoubtedly, I believe television is better. The first reason I have putted forward is that by watch tv, we know there are so many events,语法错误,There are three evidences support my opinion. Big c
14、ompany is good for people. Because they can learn more knowledge. Dinosaurs have extincted.,不断句,Take the experiences of my grandmother as an example, (断句) she is extremely interested in news and curious about the events happened every day, (断句) she love sports,A great amount of people concern the ad
15、vantage brought by building a factory, establishing a new school and environment protection, therefore, they may ignore some possibly defect, which including the heavy fiscal burden. Despite of that they find the drawback, I believe we should learn some knowledge from most of the book given by Docto
16、r King in order to eliminating the negative influential.,托福写作:两种题型,两种分值,Integrated Writing 综合写作 Independent Writing 独立写作 Raw Score 原始分值 :05分 Scaled Score 最终分值 :030分,分值换算,Percentile Rank,我们的目标是,综合写作3分以上 独立写作5分,托福写作基本知识,字数要多少? 400左右 需不需要写标题? 不需要 作文如何分段? 缩行式与空行式 标点符号后面是否需要空格? 要空格,托福写作基本知识,英式英语还是美式英语? c
17、olo(u)r, program(me), labo(u)r 书面语还是口语? 当然是书面语 BTW,U dunno, &, 4u 2B or not 2B, thats a ?,为什么要考托福? 什么样的学校承认托福成绩?,与大家共勉,Today you do the things people wont do, tomorrow you will do the things people cant do!,推荐书目,TPO OG, Deltas Key, Kaplan, Barron, Princeton 词汇: 俞敏洪 TOEFL词汇:词根+联想记忆法 张洪伟、戴云 托福10000词 语
18、法: 戴云 托福语法满分精要 张道真 实用英语语法 写作:托福写作圣经,推荐网站,辛达机经网 留留学网站 太傻、寄托天下等 新东方批改网,独立写作5分标准,Effectively addresses the topic and task Well organized and well developed Appropriate explanations, exemplifications and details Unity, progression and coherence Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demons
19、trating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice and idiomaticity. Minor lexical or grammatical errors,托福作文4分标准,Though some points may not be fully elaborated Generally well and well Though it may contain occasional redundancy, digression, or unclear connections Occasional noticeable minor,托福作文3分标
20、准,Somewhat developed explanations Though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured Lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning Accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary,托福作文2分标准,Limited development in response to the topic and task; Inadequate organization or conn
21、ection of ideas; Inappropriate or insufficient exemplifications, explanations, or details to support or illustrate generalizations in response to the task; A noticeably inappropriate choice of words or word forms; An accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage.,托福作文1分标准,Serious disorga
22、nization or underdevelopment; Little or no detail, or irrelevant specific, or questionable responsiveness to the task; Serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage.,托福作文0分标准,Merely copies words from the topic, rejects the topic, or is otherwise not connected to the topic, is written in
23、 a foreign language, consists of keystroke characters, or is blank.,独立写作目标,没有蛀牙,独立写作圣经,考查题目一定有争议,难抉择; 写作的第一要务是把观点表达清楚; 写作考试不基于考生的真实身份; 写作考试只考察语言水平,不考察思想水平; 写作是表达而不是翻译;,独立写作圣经,写作考试不同于平时写作; 观点的层次比观点的数目更重要; 写作考试不测试学生的真实想法; 逻辑错误比语法错误严重; 跑题者,打酱油也。,托福写作十六字箴言,严谨靠谱,高分得主; 随意没谱,前途未卜。,托福写作题型分类,分类方式1,比较对比 moret
24、han, asas 观点选择 Which would you prefer 自主定义,比较对比题目举例,People can benefit more from traveling in their own country than traveling in foreign countries. 在国内旅行比去国外旅行能给人们带来更多的好处。,比较对比题目举例,It is better to use our personal knowledge and experience to solve problems, rather than asking other people for advic
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