读后续写微技能指导系列1——环境描写课件(共13张PPT).pptx
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1、读后续写微技能指导 环境描写,环境描写,可以起到融情与景的效果,衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以让文章读起来有立体感和真实感。,写作思路: 第一步,先尝试概括性描述(总体描述)。 第二步,在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。,I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.(M1U1),关于天气炎热的描写,用天热衬托恶劣环境的时
2、候,常用的词有: (热);(融化);(汗流浃背);(热得吓人),翻译练习: 1)天气很闷热。(概括描写),1)The weather was so hot . 1)This weather is terrible.,hot;melt;sweat like a pig;terrible,翻译练习(细节描写): 2)天气很闷热,我汗流浃背。 2)天气很闷热,一丝风也没有,稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。 2)天气很闷热,我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。,2)This weather is terrible, I am sweating like a pig.,2)The weather was so
3、 hot that there was no wind, and the thick air seemed to be frozen.,2)The weather was so hot that I can hardly breathe.I hope it will be cooler soon.,关于雨的描写,翻译练习: 1)下起了大雨。(概括描写),用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候,常用的词有: 大暴雨; 下倾盆大雨; 被雨淋,1)It was raining cats and dogs. 1) There was a heavy downpour.,a heavy downpour 大暴雨 rai
4、n cats and dogs 下倾盆大雨 be caught in the rain 被雨淋,翻译练习(细节描写): 2)下起了大雨,溪水上张,风吹着拍打着房子。 2)下起了大雨,我到家时全湿了。,2)It was raining cats and dogs. And I was all wet when I got home.,2)It was raining cats and dogs, the streams rose and the winds blew and beat against the house.,The wind was _ dreadfully and the rai
5、n was_from the heaven, _ against the branches of lined tress.,howling,pouring,whipping,specific,surrounding scenes?,1. As _, (天空越来越黑,光线越来越暗)he quickened his steps.,2. _(微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.,the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed,The gentle breeze,3. Fro
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